Helaman 16:17–18 Textual Variants

Royal Skousen
[ 1ABCDEFGH|17 IJLMNOQRT|76 K|129 PS] and they began to reason and to contend among themselves [ 1|, ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRST] saying [ 1|, ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQS|: RT] [ 1ABCDEFGHKPS|18 IJLMNOQRT] [that 1BCDEFGHKPS|That AIJLMNOQRT] it is not reasonable that such a being as a Christ shall come

Paul Huntzinger points out (personal communication, 9 January 2004) that the punctuation and the stranding of “saying that” across two verses (in the LDS edition, the result of Orson Pratt’s 1879 versification of the text) is incorrect. The that is not part of the quote per se, and it should be associated with the preceding saying. In the standard text, the punctuation between saying and that should be removed, although such a change should probably be accompanied by a change in the beginning of verse 18, such as placing the entire phrase saying that at the beginning of the verse:

Summary: Revise the punctuation for Helaman 16:17–18 so that the subordinate conjunction that belongs to the immediately preceding saying; the verse boundary should be shifted here so that saying that does not straddle the two verses but instead either ends verse 17 or begins verse 18.

Analysis of Textual Variants of the Book of Mormon, Part. 5

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