Alma 57:2 Textual Variants

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but I sent an epistle unto the king that we were sure [that 0| 1ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRST] our forces were sufficient to take the city of Antiparah by our [ forces >% force 0|force 1ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRST]

The original manuscript has the subordinate conjunction that after the word sure. While copying to the printer’s manuscript, Oliver Cowdery accidentally omitted the that. There is only one other example in the text of sure followed by a finite clause, and that example has the subordinate conjunction that:

This example provides support for the reading of 𝓞 in Alma 57:2.

On the face of it, there is some redundancy in this passage when it refers to “our forces were sufficient to take the city Antiparah by our force”. The repeated reference to force(s) is, it would appear, intended, especially since it is extant in 𝓞. Initially in 𝓞, Oliver Cowdery wrote “by our forces” (that is, in the plural), precisely like the use of our forces at the beginning of the that-clause. Oliver’s correction to the singular shows that Joseph Smith actually dictated the singular force, that Oliver didn’t just accidentally repeat an earlier reference to forces. David Calabro also points out (personal communication) that the repeated reference sounds less redundant if we interpret the second instance, force, as an abstract noun meaning ‘strength’, in contrast to the earlier forces with its meaning ‘troops’. Nonetheless, for most instances in the text, singular force refers to troops and is virtually interchangeable with the plural forces, as in the following pair of examples:

Don Brugger points out (personal communication) that there’s another possibility here. Perhaps the clause-final phrase “by our force” is a mistake for “by force”. In other words, the earlier “our forces” led Oliver to not only initially write the plural forces in 𝓞 but also the determiner our. When he corrected the by-phrase by erasing the plural s for forces, Oliver may have neglected to cross out the our. A common enough phrase, “by force” occurs six times in the King James Bible, with five occurring with the verb take (just like here in Alma 57:2):

On the other hand, there is no independent evidence in the Book of Mormon for either phrase, “by one’s force(s)” or “by force”. Since the immediately corrected reading in 𝓞, “by our force”, will work, the critical text will maintain it, even though the our may be an error.

Summary: Restore the subordinate conjunction that in Alma 57:2 (“we were sure that our forces were sufficient”); also maintain the seemingly redundant phrase “by our force” (the immediately corrected reading in 𝓞), although there is a possibility that the our in this phrase is an error introduced by the earlier “our forces”.

Analysis of Textual Variants of the Book of Mormon, Part. 5

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