Ether 11:21 Textual Variants

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and that the Lord God would send or bring forth another people to possess the land by his power after the manner [ 1ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQS|by RT] which he brought their fathers

Here in Ether 11:21, the relative pronoun which originally stood for the whole prepositional phrase “after the manner”. Thus the relative clause, it would appear, is equivalent to stating that “he brought their fathers after this manner”. The 1920 LDS edition inserted the preposition by

in front of the which, thus making the following relative clause stand for something like “he brought their fathers by this manner”.

Elsewhere in the text, however, there are no examples of by used with manner (as in a hypothetical example such as “by this manner doth the Lord shew …”). But there are five more examples of “after the manner” followed by a relative clause headed by which:

In the first four examples, the antecedent for the relative pronoun which is the noun manner. But in the last example, as in Ether 11:21, the antecedent for the which appears to be the whole prepositional phrase, “after the manner”. In neither Ether 2:16 nor Ether 11:21 does the earliest text have a preposition such as by before the which.

The 1920 editing here in Ether 11:21 created in the LDS text a unique reading, “by the manner”. In the King James Bible, there is one instance of the phrase “by manner”, namely, by any manner in Leviticus 20:25: “and ye shall not make your souls abominable by beast or by fowl or by any manner of living thing that creepeth on the ground”. Normally the King James text uses the expression “after manner” (such as 16 of “after this manner”). Ultimately, the original reading in Ether 11:21 is not all that difficult to understand. The critical text will therefore restore the earliest reading in this passage, “after the manner which he brought their fathers”.

It should also be recalled that the Book of Mormon allows for constructions like “by his power … which he brought their fathers” (that is, without a repetition of the preposition by right before the relative pronoun which). As discussed under Helaman 13:22, the preposition in is not repeated in similar constructions:

For further discussion of this construction, see under Helaman 13:22 as well as in the addenda at the end of this part of volume 4 (there under 2 Nephi 2:22).

Summary: Restore the original text in Ether 11:21 by removing the intrusive by added in the 1920 LDS edition; the secondary phraseology “by his power after the manner by which he brought their fathers”, although possible, is not textually necessary.

Analysis of Textual Variants of the Book of Mormon, Part. 6

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